كسي مياد با هم انگليسي حرف بزنيم

[mosaferiranii]

سلام به همه دوستان ميخواستم سوال كنم كسي مياد با هم انگليسي حرف بزنيم (تلفني) از بس حرف نزدم داره انگليسي يادم ميره

[Sepehre Azadi]

By the phone?
What do mean guy?
and as last question:
What do you mean, you are going to forget English?
Have you ever been in English countries?
yes/ No.
or you're just interested to learn more and talk better.
any way!
would you please answer my questions ?
I mean if you want so, actully.
if you don't, never mind .
take care;)

[asheghe iran_p]

نوشته شده بوسيله mosaferiranii
سلام به همه دوستان ميخواستم سوال كنم كسي مياد با هم انگليسي حرف بزنيم (تلفني) از بس حرف نزدم داره انگليسي يادم ميره


لطف كنيد و به تاپيك با سواد ها مراجعه كنيد:)

[The Forgotten]

Hey fellow, listen to me, if you wanna learn more english don't do something in vain, if you feeli ill and ease about forgetting all of the stuffs, just go through the movies and try to learn and repeat the tonation and new words, thats'd be better to learn the language by heart, whish you luck, hope to hear from you soon

[صبح]

Please take care in the date of last post , It seems his English is Forgotten ;) to now :)

[The Forgotten]

o, yes, your right, so no probes, he can brush up on his knowledge, but unfortunately he didn't turn up up to now, cuz i wanna take it up with him, I'll wait for the moment that we get in touch with each other, bye then

[mostafa_sepehri]

Oh... I really want to speak with u but right now I don't have enough time. So, I 'll come soon.

[The Forgotten]

yeah for certain, i'll wait for the moment

[mostafa_sepehri]

Thanks

[maryam]

I'm also ready for that
:D

[The Forgotten]

Heloo friends, so who's ready for that, I've got a great idea, just clear up your situation

[sogol20042001]

hi friends

[سینا 555]

ok I am in it too.great

[maryam]

Hi dear dadashi
Glad 2 c u here after long long time

[سینا 555]

Hi dear dadashi
Glad 2 c u here after long long time


hi dear sis:smile07:
It is a real joy for me
to see you and others here again
I was really longing for coming back to our own home:smile06:

[maryam]

welcome back dear dadashi

[hasan32]

I'd be glad if I could help. English is somthing whish should be repeated all the time. I also feel need sb to talk to sometime in English. you know environment is important for learning a new language
regards

[skyper2007]

hi i like talk someone in english it fun and gooooooooood way for devlope our english skill

[skyper2007]

I'd be glad if I could help. English is somthing whish should be repeated all the time. I also feel need sb to talk to sometime in English. you know environment is important for learning a new language
regards

hi ok if u like we can have voice chat with yahoo so it good for devlop our speaking skill

[skyper2007]

hi friends

hi how are u

[lina]

hi freind
i trying to finde a person or a web to talk english and improve my gramer

[imanagha83]

I think that you can easily use the English grammar in daily life situations if and only if you master the simple conversations . You'll be like a kid who learns to speak without been taught how to write. Again this is nothing but a personal opinion and I welcome any sort of debates about it . I'd conclude that learning the grammar prepares you to write sentences while learning conversations skills helps you get in touch and communicate at any time

[imanagha83]

hi freind
i trying to finde a person or a web to talk english and improve my gramer




Are you going to travel to abroad? or it's regarding a job opportinuty? if you don't mind me asking

[پریسا مروتی]

yeah i am ready to talk

[پریسا مروتی]

guys who are on line now?

[چکاوک]

why you want to talk with guys

[imanagha83]

because you can talk and maybe argue with guys forever, but with girls it is so pointless to discuss things you just have to admit they are right and finish it good :cool:

Just joking

[skyper2007]

ok than we can start talking when u want put pm at my yahoo

[imanagha83]

yeah i am ready to talk

!Sure if you want to do it here

[imanagha83]

why you want to talk with guys

It all depends on intentions right? If it is just talking why should one make a big deal out of it? and if it is not only for the sake of learning and educating one another then any thing could be used not just talking with opposite gender
:)

[غريبه]

hi guys I don't speak english well I hope to start from here with all view:D

[غريبه]

well actualy a I'm know little about english but still I use some help from al wafi for english

[sorushmotamedi]

bale
hi
are you ok?
i am from tehran
for better conversation send me an email:smile28:

[khodadoost]

I HAVE LESSER TIME THAN SPEAK VERY LONG
BUT I LIKE TO PRACTICE ENGLISH

[صبح]

well actualy a I'm know little about english but still I use some help from al wafi for english

Salaam
what is alwafi
?

[میرزا عبدالزکی]

Hi friends.
I am ready to make conversation.
thanks a lot
mirza

[میرزا عبدالزکی]

Is there any person?

[میرزا عبدالزکی]

i will wait and will sit here.

[غريبه]

Salaam
what is alwafi
?

sorry for keep you wait but alwafi is a program for transler from inglish to arabic wich wen i dont use it i write wrong like now:D

[imanagha83]

I was guessing that al wafi could be some kind of a web site that provides the service online. Is there really not any web site for that purpose? I actually used to know some , but I'm not at all sure if they happen to exist now though;)

[Scorpion]

hello
why don't you use Babylon instead?

[غريبه]

why don't you speech English more & faster?
because that way we learn faster and better
+ we can put subject & talk about it

[غريبه]

like we can talk about the Situation in the any pleace on the world.

[غريبه]

you know google right ?
there are a Translate program you can even Translate with every language every thing you want
http://translate.google.com/translate_t?sl=ar&tl=en?sl=ar&tl=en

[غريبه]

still no one is here:D

[غريبه]

any way this is a forum for learn English from the oxford university & it's v cool
http://www.language-course-directory.com/language-schools/oxford.html

[غريبه]

for test you'r english level go
http://www.learn4good.com/languages/english_level.htm
this another one
http://www.uefap.com/test/default.htm

& another
http://www.englishjet.com/english_courses_files/tests.htm

[میرزا عبدالزکی]

i am here. is there any person here?

[@محدثه@]

hello, how are you?;)

[ساز دهنی]

good thank u
مارو see نميكنين happy هستين؟

[نگارینا]

yesssssssssssssssssssssssss:D

[roshanak]

what do you do?;)

[hooshdaran3]

for' is a preposition; you have to use the -ing forn of a verb(gerund) after a preposition.

[ساز دهنی]

no undrestand my friend:confused:

[diana*]

hiiiiiiiiiii

[diana*]

i'm alone:smile09:

[ساز دهنی]

are u crazy?:D

[diana*]

no,i think you are:D
are you ok?

[ساز دهنی]

yes كم و very
how much سن و year?

[diana*]

i'm19
and you?

[ساز دهنی]

i'm 25
say از خودت:D

[diana*]

:Dyou are Funny
what can i say?

[diana*]

i don't know what should i say here?:D

[ساز دهنی]

اينجوري best تره

[ساز دهنی]

i don't know what should i say here?:D
amir dear freind

[diana*]

i'm glad to see you amir

[ساز دهنی]

منم too

[diana*]

thanks:smile07:

[ساز دهنی]

u هم مثل me ، خيلي hungry هستي؟

[diana*]

no
why you don't eat lunch?

[ساز دهنی]

i'm alone dear freind :smile22:

[diana*]

no problem
you shouldn't sad!!

[diana*]

i'd go
bye:smile07:

[ساز دهنی]

bye bye ت ميكنيم

[maryam57s]

Can I ask you? , Do you think that you know English very well

[ساز دهنی]

yessssssssssssssssss

[maryam57s]

It's good . You know meaning of "yes" . Excellent
what's your name? what's your last name? How old you
what do you do
Are you a student or no ! you work
What's your favorit sport
where were you
Are you in tehran

[shabnam_lor]

it sounds you guys just want to flirt in English and no conversation other wise you would have talked about some interesting matters . however I wish you good luck . i could be interested to talk with a gentleman, if there is any ? If not let it go

[maryam57s]

I'm here. What's your problem

[میرزا عبدالزکی]

ها...؟

[نادین]

آره حتما

[نادین]

well i think there should be a topic for starting a conversation in english or any other language right???????????
so ,,,i am waiting 4 a good one!!!:smile55:

[maryam57s]

yes, It's good that everybody speak enghlish in this topic
If you want speak another language you can go out
Is it clear:mad:

[ساز دهنی]

It's good . You know meaning of "yes" . Excellent
what's your name? what's your last name? How old you
what do you do
Are you a student or no ! you work
What's your favorit sport
where were you
Are you in tehran


amir
bemandation
busy
no
football
ilam
no in tehran

[@محدثه@]

HELLO MR AMIR
I hope you be happy!:smile28:

[ساز دهنی]

ohhh mer30 thank u
how news?

[@محدثه@]

Im sorry_I havent new news

[ساز دهنی]

يه شعر كاملا انگليسي:
fasele ye harfe tazas bein didan o nadidan
begoo sarfe ba kodoome shenidan ya nashenidan
:D:D

[diana*]

hiiiiiiiiiiiiii to all:smile07:

[@محدثه@]

:cool:Im mrs mohadeseh _master in english

[diana*]

what's up?

[ساز دهنی]

hiiiiiiiiiiiiii to all:smile07:
aleik Hiiiii all to u

[@محدثه@]

well_I should go to home
because Im in cofi net
ok goodby:smile24:

[ساز دهنی]

bye master mohadese

[maryam57s]

يه شعر كاملا انگليسي:
fasele ye harfe tazas bein didan o nadidan
begoo sarfe ba kodoome shenidan ya nashenidan
:D:D
__________________
Please just speak english:mad:
Do you undrestand

[ساز دهنی]

yes كم و very

[maryam57s]

Dear Mr sazdahani
Do you know English ? realy?
just answer yes or no. ok.:smile27:
please don't write pershian:smile39:

[ساز دهنی]

YES

[maryam57s]

Eexcellent. Mr saz dahani. You have wrote a good sentences about "gerani" . I have wrote it on the board of my room in my office. when my frinds read it , they say :"it is very nice and intresting" . thank you

[ساز دهنی]

Eexcellent. Mr saz dahani. You have wrote a good sentences about "gerani" . I have wrote it on the board of my room in my office. when my frinds read it , they say :"it is very nice and intresting" . thank you

just for u honey:smile07:

[*shokoofe*]

hello i come;)

[@محدثه@]

hello i come;)
این البته نام کاربری دیگه منه;)

[maryam57s]

please don't write pershian

[ساز دهنی]

hiiiiiiiii

[بارانی]

hello
i want speak english

[ساز دهنی]

really?!

[بارانی]

yes of cours

[بارانی]

hi MR AMIR how are u

[ساز دهنی]

thanks mrs barani honey
how news?

[بارانی]

healthy:D

[ساز دهنی]

thanks god

[بارانی]

i ll have english exam last week pliz pray for me

[ساز دهنی]

i'm sorry my friend
i do'nt very good speak english:D

[بارانی]

ok its not problem

[maryam57s]

i ll have english exam last week pliz pray for me
what level do you have exam

[diana*]

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

[ساز دهنی]

hiiiii
how are u?

[diana*]

no important
&u?

[ساز دهنی]

no bad
how news?

[diana*]

nothing
&u?

[ساز دهنی]

shit

[diana*]

Every tear is a
sign of commitment.
Every silence is a
sign of compromise.
Every smile is a
sign of attachment.
Every effort is a
sign of success

[diana*]

do you remember me?
like i remember you
go in baking your mind to the time
i walk to street alone....

[ساز دهنی]

يه ترانه زيبا به انگليسي:
inja ghahran sineha ba mehrabooni ,to too jangal nemitoonesti bemooni

[diana*]

When God says "yes" He gives you whatever you want
When He says "No" he gives you sth better
And when He says "Wait" He gives you the best

[diana*]

you believe it?

[ساز دهنی]

yes very nice thank u

[a_d]

THE ROSE

Some say love it is a river
That drowns the tender reed
Some say love it is a razor
That leaves your soul to bleed

Some say love it is a hunger

An endless, aching need
I say love it is a flower,
And you it's only seed

It's the heart afraid of breaking
That never learns to dance
It's the dream afraid of waking
That never takes the chance

It's the one who won't be taken,
Who cannot seem to give
And the soul afraid of dying
That never learns to live

When the night has been too lonely
And the road has been too long
And you think that love is only
For the lucky and the strong

Just remember in the winter

Far beneath the bitter snow
Lies the seed that with the sun's love,
In the spring, becomes the rose

[maryam57s]

Wher are you
Nobody isn't here

[roshanak]

dear i am here:)

[a_d]

sorry
i can,t speak eng very well:D

[farnazgol]

hi
i didnt see this topic already
its very nice
thanks for all of your beautiful posts:smile07:

[RASH]

Hi
every body

[maryam57s]

Hi Dear ,
Please come to this topic and speak English , it's good for us, However we can't speak very well
ok?

[RASH]

But it seems that your English is good

[maryam57s]

I has studied English in level E4 in Kish

[maryam57s]

“ Another day, another month, another year,
Another smile, another tear, another winter,
A summer too, but there will be never another you!

May lovely happy times decorate this time of the season.
May warm, special memories brighten your New Year.
May the wonder of Norooz be with you forever! “

I wish you a New Year that brings good friends, good health, good luck and the best of things to you
May all your dreams come true

[فرزند آدم]

oh my god thats so romance.:D

[eagle20031978]

I studied English till level E4 in Kish.,or I have studied English till level E4 in Kish .(sorry to rewrite ur sentence miss maryam) I has studied English in level E4 in Kish

[maryam57s]

I studied English till level E4 in Kish.,or I have studied English till level E4 in Kish .(sorry to rewrite ur sentence miss maryam) I has studied English in level E4 in Kish

Excuse me . My sentence isn't correct. "I have studied " is correct becuase I continue studied now

[eagle20031978]

Excuse me . My sentence isn't correct. "I have studied " is correct becuase I continue studied now

sorry miss maryam on daring to point out ur mistake again.hope u won't mind 'n' forgive me .had u said "because i have resumed my studies now", it would have looked better 'n' more beautiful.

[فرزند آدم]

excuse me sir can you say whats your education??:smile20:

[eagle20031978]

excuse me sir can you say whats your education??:smile20:

i beg ur pardon sir if u felt i crossed my limits or offended anybody.believe me had no such intention.
to tell u the truth sir ,i feel so embarassed when someone asks me 'bout the level of my education :smile05:

[eagle20031978]

[quote=فرزند آدم;837664]oh my god thats so romance.:D[/quot

oh my god!that's so romantic

[Amir.Reich]

hi there dear friends
i just registered myself in this site and this topic atrract me to leave my first comment
. about a 6years or alittle more i studied languege here in Anzali
i think its good to help the members in slangs and idioms and other conversation skills

[eagle20031978]

thanks sir for ur comment
looking forward for ur 'helping hand'

[maryam57s]

sorry miss maryam on daring to point out ur mistake again.hope u won't mind 'n' forgive me .had u said "because i have resumed my studies now", it would have looked better 'n' more beautiful.
Thank you
I am studing English in kish

[ساز دهنی]

يه شعر جديد به زبان انگليسي :
akhar ye shab in geryeha sooye cheshamo mibare

atret dare az pithani ke ja gozashti mipare

[maryam57s]

Thanks Mr.sazdahani but please just write English poem. ok

[ساز دهنی]

chashm u

[maryam57s]

you'r welcome

[ساز دهنی]

mer987
يكي به من انگليسي ياد بده تا تا آخر عمر برده حلقه بگوشش باشم

[maryam57s]

ok . I'm ready . but i'm married. you must find another dougther

[ساز دهنی]

oh shit
i'm ke nakahstam zan getting konam khastam language learningam

[maryam57s]

برده حلقه بگوش = hasband

[ساز دهنی]

no no u are 2char tavahom shoding

[maryam57s]

ok . I don't teach english :cool:

[ساز دهنی]

be hell i learning dar hade olympic

[maryam57s]

Realy?

[ساز دهنی]

yes but no teaching for u

[maryam57s]

ok. It's better for me. i'm happy that I don't teach you English. however you write nice poems
maby It's better

[ساز دهنی]

u are hasood ،hasoooding with me becuase me end of languaging

[maryam57s]

:smile21:

[ساز دهنی]

oh smilling kon

[maryam57s]

Is smailing bad? ok :smile22:

[eagle20031978]

? fly 'r' sink


Trying to fly,
So high 'n' high,
With bleeding heart,
'n' broken wings.
Knowing so well,
That she is right,
Why do I feel,
This terrible pain.

I wasn't touched ,
When called STONE,
I took it light,
When told,
I was COLD.


But....
When she told,
You better get lost,
I felt dumbfounded ,
'n'
Lost my speech.

But .....
She is right ,
I know she is right,
Then why can't I be calm 'n' quiet,
I try so hard to keep my calm,
Ofcourse i'm calm,
Ofcourse i'm quiet,

But who can see my heaving chest,
But who can see my thumping heart.

I talk with stars ,
I chat with moon,
I whisper with clouds,
Who damp my soul.
But no one can give me,
That solace,
Which was hidden,
in her smile.


Those shrieks 'n' shrills,
That laugh 'n' smile,
Those witty chats,
Those cries 'n' sighs,
They all have gone,
It's all but past .


Then why this try ,
To fly so high,
Let me get drowned,
In my archive,
Where i could find ,
Her vibrant self.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

[maryam57s]

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh:eek:

[ساز دهنی]

hi
good morning

[maryam57s]

Hi, good morning? How are you? are you fine? Weather is snowing. it is very nice

[ساز دهنی]

really nice .i'm fine .how are you khodet?

[maryam57s]

If i don't Think mistake , you are in Khoramabd
yes?

[ساز دهنی]

no honey .i live in ILAM

[maryam57s]

Is it snowing there
I traveled to Khoramabad 2 yeras ago. It is very nice
Is Ilam near to Khoramabad

[ساز دهنی]

yes near and almost ham languaging

[maryam57s]

I went there in spring. shaghaiegh and laleh flowers grew. There was very nice
I enjoied from that travel

[ساز دهنی]

ta bashe from travelling

[maryam57s]

I travele for working. becuase I had a project in khoramabad and I went there for accounting

[ساز دهنی]

what your job?

[maryam57s]

I'm an accountant

[maryam57s]

what your job?
This sentence isn't correct.
What is your job
or
What do you do
ok?

[ساز دهنی]

ok mer30 honey
good luck

[maryam57s]

you'r welcome

[ساز دهنی]

can u speak kordi?:D

[maryam57s]

NO I CAN'T . BUT MY MANAGER IS KORDISH. HE CAN

[ساز دهنی]

ok your manager is best language :D

[ز به ز]

hello guys i like to speak English today :D
who's here now ??

talk with me please

[فرزند آدم]

im here sire how are you?

[maryam57s]

I'm here . here you are

[فرزند آدم]

yeh lady me too how are?

[maryam57s]

Pardon:confused:

[فرزند آدم]

why?:D

[ز به ز]

so how is today with you guys ?

[maryam57s]

How ? me or farzan adam

[eagle20031978]

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh:eek:

was it 4 me ?does this gesture means a word of praise?whatsoever it may be ,thanks if it was 4 me .

[eagle20031978]

If i don't Think mistake , you are in Khoramabd


yes?


excuse me ,but don't u think this expression would have been better?

if i'm not mistaken ,you are from khoramabad.right?

[maryam57s]

excuse me ,but don't u think this expression would have been better?

if i'm not mistaken ,you are from khoramabad.right?
Your poem is very nice and butifull
Thank you for correcting my mistake

[eagle20031978]

Your poem is very nice and butifull

Thank you for correcting my mistake


thanks again madam for praising my poem.it's an honour for me that u regard it as nice and 'beautiful'.
regading correction i fear that u may feel offended ,but then i think u may not feel so ,because basically we are here to correct one another so that we may improve ourselves.pleased to note that u too have the same opinion.

[maryam57s]

Thanks alot my teacher

[eagle20031978]

Thanks alot my teacher

hey! hey ! maryam khaanam ! please don't exalt me to a position which i don't deserve.fortunately i know my limitations 'n' know very well that i'm far inferior even to dream of such a respectable place.let me be my normal self 'n' let's strive together to improve ourselves.

[maryam57s]

Mr.Eagle I don't know English very well but you know English very well so you are my teacher and realy you are a good teacher for me
I'm trying to learn your lesson

[justbluem]

hi:D
i am a new student:D

[maryam57s]

hi. How are you
please talk about yourself

[justbluem]

thanks:D
my name is mahmood 20 years old
:Dand i am electronic collegian

[maryam57s]

pleased to meet you

[justbluem]

me too

[maryam57s]

what's your favorite book, sport, food, color

[justbluem]

i love raymond chandler's book. and now i study The Long Goodbye:smile06:
in color i love black and blue.
in sport i like play soccer
and in food i like قرمه سبزی:D(به انگلیسی قرمه سبزی چی میشه؟؟؟:D:D)
what about you????

[maryam57s]

About color: I like green and blue
about sport : I like youga and swimming
about foos : I like kebab and chicken. they are very delicious
about book : I like histiry books and romantic books

[میرزا عبدالزکی]

Hi
can i take part in this discus?

[maryam57s]

yes, your welcome

[نگارینا]

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Mahmood lets have a discution like this in Arabic:D

[میرزا عبدالزکی]

Thanks a lot
what ways do you suggest to learning English?

[maryam57s]

I'm going to Kish institute in Africa street. I wach film , music and read book
Mr.Hooshdaran saies" going to class is good to lerarning and help us for speaking
I'm in Elemntry 4 in Kish institute

[میرزا عبدالزکی]

That is right.
but
I had not enough time to go to institute.
Last year in summer, i was in Jahad daneshgahi institute in rashtchi street.(enqlab squer). but i could not perform final exam. i was in elementery 4.

[maryam57s]

I think that we must go to class on time otherwise we can't learn English very well
Have you got any jobs

[نگارینا]

movies can help you alot

[a_d]

habbe angor(negarina) is the best girl for her grandfather in the earth:D

[نگارینا]

and her granfather is the best too:smile06:

[a_d]

oh dadiiiiiiiiii:D:smile06:

[میرزا عبدالزکی]

I think that we must go to class on time otherwise we can't learn English very well
Have you got any jobs
No
but i have a big problem: KONKUR

[نگارینا]

konkoor is not a problem
is a funny work:D:D

[a_d]

I hope you be sucssful in this exams:D

[نگارینا]

oh dadiiiiiiiiii:D:smile06:
:smile25:daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad:D

[a_d]

i cant speak eng very well, inparticular i speak eng very bad:D

[نگارینا]

nooooooooooooo
you speak very well

[میرزا عبدالزکی]

konkoor is not a problem
is a funny work:D:D
no. i believe that Konkur is a good thing if we have a suitable scheduling.
but i want to speak English very well and Konkur takes my times. all times.

[میرزا عبدالزکی]

I hope you be sucssful in this exams:D
thanks a lot:smile07:

[نگارینا]

you can learn English after konkoor

[میرزا عبدالزکی]

Oh time is pasting now...

[maryam57s]

I think that if you want learn English , you must practice every day. One hour in aday
Sometimes, moveing
sometimes, reading
and sometimes, writing
even listening

[میرزا عبدالزکی]

moveing means watch English film?
Is one hour in a day enough?

[maryam57s]

I think that,watching film is enouoh for learning vocabulary but for grammer no
you must practice writing and reading and go to English class

[میرزا عبدالزکی]

thanks a lot for your help:smile07:

[maryam57s]

thanks a lot for your help:smile07:
your welcome

[eagle20031978]

Mr.Eagle I don't know English very well but you know English very well so you are my teacher and realy you are a good teacher for me

I'm trying to learn your lesson


mrs.maryam please don't underestimate yourself.your english is really so good and you are so fluent in it :smile39: .i'm not trying to project myself as a humble fellow ,but since i know my limitations let me again request you not to regard me as someone who could dare to be a teacher.let's work together 'n' i'm sure it would help both of us.

[ساز دهنی]

hi goodmorning

[maryam57s]

mrs.maryam please don't underestimate yourself.your english is really so good and you are so fluent in it :smile39: .i'm not trying to project myself as a humble fellow ,but since i know my limitations let me again request you not to regard me as someone who could dare to be a teacher.let's work together 'n' i'm sure it would help both of us.
Thanks alot. I'm happy for it

[eagle20031978]

The Call

it's just like ages ago ,i heard ,
a Call so sweet that i can't express,
as if came out from a river of honey,
as if came out from drops of dew,
it was so soft ,so pure ,so touching,
so strong ' and clear with a magnetic note,

it lured my heart ,it lured my brain,
it made me forget where i stood.
just trailed behind that sweetest Call ,
till i found myself in this world.

this world of millions 'n' billions of men ,
found every one running 'n' searching someone.
i asked them "hey!did u call me"?
i asked them "look!did u call me.

with a simple nay they nodded at me ,
.no,we din't call ,"was their reply "
we too r here pursuing that Call ,
the sweetest Call which ever heard

[maryam57s]

Realy It's very interesting. i enjoy from it

[hooshdaran3]

maryam!you enjoy something, NOT

[hooshdaran3]

from sometthing

[hooshdaran3]

eagle, you can express something, you cannot use 'express' alone

[hooshdaran3]

there can not be 1 time, 2 times, 3 times etc.time cannot be counted

[maryam57s]

from sometthing

I enjoy from Mr.Eagle 's poem
It's very interesting

[hooshdaran3]

time's passing, 'past' is not a verb.
moveing' is a verb, really??'

[maryam57s]

time's passing, 'past' is not a verb.
moveing' is a verb, really??'
Is it about Mr.Eagle's mistake

[eagle20031978]

eagle, you can express something, you cannot use 'express' alone

thanks mr.hooshdaran.actually i wanted to add 'it 'at the end but unfortunately the rhythm of the line was getting disturbed ;so i preferred to delete it .but u r right .for the sake of rhythm we can't neglect grammer.shall think 'bout rewriting it.

[eagle20031978]

Realy It's very interesting. i enjoy from it



Really it's very interesting.i enjoyed it.

thanks mrs.maryam for approving my effort. i know there's no rhyming but
i tried to maintain the rhythm to some extent.looking forward for ur expert comments
actually wanted to title it as 'Alastu be rabbekom'but then i thought it would be so direct and will not leave the reader to ponder for awhile. so preferred to title it as "The Call"don't u think it's more proper?

[eagle20031978]

Is it about Mr.Eagle's mistake
no,mrs maryam.
i think he is commenting on mr. mirza zaki's message

[eagle20031978]

there can not be 1 time, 2 times, 3 times etc.time cannot be counted

sorry mr.hooshdaran.i don't know yoy are referring to whose mistake; but let me present my view.here there's no question of counting time.instead here time stands for multiples.you can always say "10 times better or 5 times more etc.
ofcourse the expression one time ,two times ,three times is incorrect.here we are expected to say 'once,twice or thrice .but after thrice we can always say four times ,five times etc.for example we can say'this thing costs five times the original value'
correct me if i'm wrong..